Parts to a Recount

We were witing about the words in a recount.  The first words for the recount are in the bun and they are like when, how, what and where.  In the pattie I wrote the sequence of events and in the lettuce  I wrote the words you can use to sequence First, second, thirdly, after, that, next  and lastly. In the other bun I wrote how you felt about the event.

I learnt that the words you can use in the lettuce you can use as steps for what you have done.

 

 

 

When I am Famous Writing

I have been learning to put all my capital letters and full stops in my writing correctly.

When I am famous I will buy a helicopter and fly around the world to look for injured sea animals to help them.   

When I am famas I will be a famous rugby player so I can help my  rugby players to show sportsmanship.

When I am famous I will work for a special company to make the internet safe for others.

When I am famous I will give eople a ride in my helicopter to be nice.

When I’m famous I will be a motorbike racer so I can be happy.

When I am Famous I’ll go to the beach and look after the environment by picking up rubbish.

When I’m famous I’ll give people who don’t have a home a blanket because they don’t have a home.

When I am famous I will be a builder and make Playgrounds for kids at their school.

  When I am famous I will help other kids in the morning.  

When I am Famous I will Play League and be good by listening to my coach.

Taking flight

We had to write heaps of writing about the grandad and the dad and the boy.  Those are all the characters. We had to write about the boy and the grandad and that they almost got eaten by crocodiles. They fell down a waterfall then the boat turned into a plane. Then they had to jump off the plane then they almost got zapped by aliens. I enjoyed taking the photos. I found it easy to write as I had a movie to watch.

Me and my dad are going to my grandads houes. When we got to my grandads house. When I wanted to play with my dad. My grandad was mowing the lawn. When I saw a picture with my grandad and dad. I climbed to get it. Then I fell and the helmet rolled to the lawn.  My grandad saw it and went where did you get the picture and then he told me why don’t we take it for a spin.  I said yes and I was having a great day imagining.

I day dreamed that we were in a jungle.  Then the wagon turned into a boat and crocodiles tried to eat us. Then we went down a waterfall. with Our boa tturned into an aeroplane. Then the planw was out of fuel so we had to jump. Then we put on our parachutes.  Then my granddad was talking about aliens.Then aliens were trying to zap us but I zapped them. When I tried to zap the spaceship it turned out it was my dads car. The thing that I used to zap things with was a hose.  Dad got out of the car, my dad said to grandad and me, “how did you get so filthy?” He looked at the wagon and he said, “has he told you about the time we went to the moon?” Then we went to the moon. Astronauts prepare for lift off.   We were flying really high it was so much fun.

 

I Like Poem

We wrote a poem about what I like and don’t like.  Then we had to draw a picture that looked like us.   Then we had to put it together and record ourselves.  My favourite part was recording myself reading my poem.

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